There was way too much "tell me" rather than "show me" writing, which smoothed out after the first few chapters. Unfortunately, the main character remained too immature for me to stomach the whole book through. On the bright side, my husband bet me $20 and a foot rub that the "silver bellybutton ring" that I was complaining showed up way too often would be important later (for demon/vampire hunting purposes). Not important, in this book at least, and I'm going to enjoy every minute of that foot rub.
Full review to follow.